User talk:D fallen god

Welcome
Hi, welcome to 11eyes Wiki! Thanks for your edit to the User talk:Venom00 page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Venom00 (Talk) 04:23, September 11, 2010

Hello
Oh finally, a visitor! I was worried that this wiki is going deserted.

Thanks for reminding me. I'll be sure to update some information about 3days. I haven't finished reading it yet but I guess I can put up a summary as a placeholder.

If you know anything else about the game, please make some edits to help me out with this wiki. Since I used ATLAS to read the visual novel, I'm not sure I can write everything exactly here.Venom00 04:56, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Ok ok
But put four "~" at the end of your post next time okay? Venom00 12:06, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

I see
I think your translation is really good and detail but you translated too literally and you did not reorganize the sentence back into English thoroughly (you did, but it was not enough, that's why it sound cumbersome when read in English).

Thank for your translation, I realized my mistake as I translated that part to Venom00, it should be. For friends and tomorrow, with these words inside their hearts as they made their ways through the Red Night, these (even though there is no "ko no" here, I put these to refer back to the previous phrase, this make it flow better) seven young men and women stood up to face strong enemies. (first, I used past tense because 向かった is past tense here, second, in Jap, you don't have single/plural indicator in form of 's' and 'es', so you can't say A powerful opponent, third, 敵 is better translated as enemy, opponent is more like 相手). Also the last phrase

彼らの過去、そして未来とは― just simply means their pass (彼ら is their, kare means he, ra is the equivalent of tachi in watashitachi), and then their future.

Hope this help.

Jishou 20:22, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

As I've said... ="=
Sign by putting 4 "~" at the end of your post when you talk to someone on their talk page. It's not that difficult to do, is it? Venom00 17:58, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

My mail is
[mailto:hunglac999@yahoo.com hunglac999@yahoo.com], I think I might help the translation starting Tuesday.

Jishou 23:19, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Finally
Lass 5th style is coming, yayayayayyayaya, sorry I can't do translation anymore, I'm now a USC School of Pharmacy student right now.

Jishou 01:08, December 4, 2011 (UTC)